literature

a machine

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Literature Text

i don't know how to tell you
i don't know what to say
every word seems upside down
every tear seems meaningless
and my feet are frozen
and my heart is numbing

i wish i could build a machine
that shows you everything
a machine that says all the right words
never anything mean
a machine that hooks you into me
to show you my realities

the gods know my tongue is a dumb girl
that forgets good vocabulary
she is twisted and tied
by the tug of those strings
and she means....
and she means...
and she means...

i wish i could build a machine
that shows you everything
a machine that says all the right words
never anything mean
a machine that hooks you into me
to show you my realities

and she means....
and she means...
and she means...
and I mean.
when you just wish you could show them your insides. i thought about a machine - somewhat inspired by the film brainstorm.
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crusadist01's avatar
I wish I had that machine too. Damn. I told you my problem about reading your poetry. lol So you understand why my comment will be brief and to the point on this one. Great visuals here. A lot of strong imagery. You asked me to be critical, and yet I can never find myself saying anything but nice things about your stuff, because you are so damn good at writing. So I leave you with a "good job" kik