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she just defined it for me
that time when the cruel boy
kissed me in front of the tv
angry pressing against my lips
and the silence that followed it
our lover had taken herself away
betrayed us with a killing
left us both in exquisite pain
with no one to cry to
for our own unforgiving betrayals
deemed selfish girl and cruel boy worthless
and so she defines it:
allies in darkness.
©2004-2009 ~seraphjordan
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:iconcrusadist01:
Devious thoughts? that is what this section is called right? This makes me think seriously devious thoughts. I really like this. A really strong statement. Great job
:iconlaurapalmer:
All lower case letters for such powerful words and images make this poem more striking. Nice touch. I really really really really like this one a lot.

Heather

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I am the muffin.
:iconseraphjordan:
It is so funny you say that. Usually I type most of them out all lowercase, but this one was intentional. Strange moments.
:iconlaurapalmer:
strange moments indeed my friend.

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I am the muffin.

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